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Another flash of bright left me blinking as I ran dizzily round in circles. Beneath me my legs wobbled slightly. I attempted to stabilise myself, though to no avail. It was early in the morning and the bright sunlight hurt my eyes terribly. It crept up past the house and into the garden, occasionally searing my vision each time I came to a full circle. Still I ran, as if the caustic nature of the light hardly bothered me at all.
Two pairs of legs were moving around me. Recognising both I attempted to grab onto one of the legs, stumbling as I did so. A hand helpful caught me and assisted me to stand straight.
“Oh, stand still.”
I looked skywards, at the familiar smiling face. Her dark brown eyes were dancing in the light as she grinned down at me. Curious, I stretched my arm out in an attempt to grab them. My reach, however, fell short.
Then I was off again, running as fast as my legs could take me. My freedom was brief, as I was firmly seized, and placed upon a small square of concrete. I immediately took a dislike to the new ground. It was uneven under my feet, and impeded my balance. Clutching helplessly at the air I wobbled, unsure of my footing. Before I could move to escape the discomfort something was thrust into my hand. I blinked at the large rose momentarily, and then tossed it aside.
“No, Shenay. Hold onto it sweetie.”
Instantly the rose was placed back into my hand. I stared up at the two women with wonder.
What were they doing?
Curiously I ran towards them, stumbling slightly as I approached. Once again I dropped the rose.
“Hold still,” laughed the other woman. She stepped forward and lifted me high up into the air. I struggled, but then stopped as I caught sight of my reflection in her glasses. Fascinated, I made a grab for them.
“No, no, you can’t have them,” the lady laughed.
I beamed, giggling, as I recognised her voice. She placed me back down and I grabbed a fistful of her grey curls.
“Ow! No Shenay.”
The hair was pulled out of my grap, and I was placed once more upon the square of concrete. Somebody then placed the rose back into my hand.
“Catherine! Take the picture now!”
There was a bright flash, and a click.
“Gotcha!”
Two pairs of legs were moving around me. Recognising both I attempted to grab onto one of the legs, stumbling as I did so. A hand helpful caught me and assisted me to stand straight.
“Oh, stand still.”
I looked skywards, at the familiar smiling face. Her dark brown eyes were dancing in the light as she grinned down at me. Curious, I stretched my arm out in an attempt to grab them. My reach, however, fell short.
Then I was off again, running as fast as my legs could take me. My freedom was brief, as I was firmly seized, and placed upon a small square of concrete. I immediately took a dislike to the new ground. It was uneven under my feet, and impeded my balance. Clutching helplessly at the air I wobbled, unsure of my footing. Before I could move to escape the discomfort something was thrust into my hand. I blinked at the large rose momentarily, and then tossed it aside.
“No, Shenay. Hold onto it sweetie.”
Instantly the rose was placed back into my hand. I stared up at the two women with wonder.
What were they doing?
Curiously I ran towards them, stumbling slightly as I approached. Once again I dropped the rose.
“Hold still,” laughed the other woman. She stepped forward and lifted me high up into the air. I struggled, but then stopped as I caught sight of my reflection in her glasses. Fascinated, I made a grab for them.
“No, no, you can’t have them,” the lady laughed.
I beamed, giggling, as I recognised her voice. She placed me back down and I grabbed a fistful of her grey curls.
“Ow! No Shenay.”
The hair was pulled out of my grap, and I was placed once more upon the square of concrete. Somebody then placed the rose back into my hand.
“Catherine! Take the picture now!”
There was a bright flash, and a click.
“Gotcha!”
Literature
Pain, Death, Time
Pain is patient,
Pain is kind,
All of us bend to Time,
Too much of either, or,
A final breath,
He'll be waiting,
The Reaper, Death.
Literature
Time never Changes
Time is a concept that never stops. It is something we can't change. Time keeps moving and it changes a person. It can create new things and improves a person's talent. A person's age can't stop and erase a person's memory. When time moves, I see the moon and it's beautiful light that it creates. I hate it when city lights removes and blinds the stars from my sight. Nature can bend to time's will, but time will never do the same. Memories are a part of people and a part of time itself. Madness is the end of a person and an evil of time that it created. I have been a victim of madness and of time. My father's life was brought short because of
Literature
Reminders of the past
random moments
taking me back in time
the scent of you
the way you looked at me
watched me walk away
let me go
despite the desire
to hold on forever
transported to that moment
a split second
and everything comes flooding back
the feel of you
against me
the way my heart raced
when you were near
a wound
so suddenly
overwhelmingly
fresh
despite
the years
the others
so much
in between
all it took
was that random moment
and i'm split open
again
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I recently found this piece, which I did when I was still in high school. I think I was 16?
..ANYWAY..
We were to use an old photo of ourselves as a prompt to write a short passage.
It had to be 500 words, and in first person.
The picture I chose was one of me when I was two years old, and my Mum and my Oma were trying to take a picture of me. It was pretty much the only photo I could find.
So this is what I came up with.
I found it interesting, as it's the only time I've written anything from the perspective of a baby (practically a baby) so I just thought I'd share it.
EDIT: Just read through this and realised that I accidentally changed the baby's name halfway through the text. My bad :s All fixed now.
..ANYWAY..
We were to use an old photo of ourselves as a prompt to write a short passage.
It had to be 500 words, and in first person.
The picture I chose was one of me when I was two years old, and my Mum and my Oma were trying to take a picture of me. It was pretty much the only photo I could find.
So this is what I came up with.
I found it interesting, as it's the only time I've written anything from the perspective of a baby (practically a baby) so I just thought I'd share it.
EDIT: Just read through this and realised that I accidentally changed the baby's name halfway through the text. My bad :s All fixed now.
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First off, I like this; it pulled me out my dark world for a moment, and let me remember what it felt like to be kid again.
The perspective of a small child was spot on, and I thought to myself, wow this is like when i was a happy little kid.
The perspective of a small child was spot on, and I thought to myself, wow this is like when i was a happy little kid.